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It is said that people come into ones life,
to teach them things and help them out,
in order for them to grow and sprout.
Some help you with the tears so rife,
while others pull away the knife.
They seem to know right when we are in doubt,
and just how to fix the current strife.
So we treasure what they teach us about.

I know I have been changed by these people,
I have learned the bitter taste from being betrayed,
and the bounteous bliss of forgiving.
So I say thanks to he in the steeple,
for letting this lesson be portrayed,
by someone so random and giving.
©2007-2009 ~khamwon1
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Author's Comments

Inspired by the lyrics form the song For Good from Wicked.

*Special thanks to Emily for helping me with some rhyming when i got stuck.*

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:icondimpled:
Oh wow! :clap: This is a spectacular deviation. :D Do keep it up! :highfive:

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:iconkhamwon1:
thank you so very much! im glad you liked it :hug:

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:iconsneaky-snake:
Awesome poem, as always. :]
I envy your rhyming skills, haha.

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:iconno1cares4me:
beautiful....i am a sucker for italian sonnets. great story, it is so beautiful and true!
:iconkhamwon1:
thank you, u r an equally talented poet.

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I love Italian sonnets, they are a little harder/takes more time but they are so beatiful. Thank you for the kind words.

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:iconmagicaljoey:
It is really beautiful and so emotional. I love it, really good job.
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thank you! :hug:

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