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A tree now fecund, a fruit ripe with time,
a child’s innocence has begun to sublime.
A mind confused in the beauty of life’s rhyme,
finally decides to begin adulthood’s long climb.

A stranger lost in a brand new land,
the changes are all they wish to understand.
A mind so innocent, naive, and bland,
pleads that their knowledge will expand.

Yet the fear of change haunts a parents mind,
the loss of their little angel is too much to handle.
A thought of maturation makes them blind,
so they flee to the church to light their candle,
and cry for Christ to come help this unwind.
Still when he comes they are to stubborn to follow-
©2007-2010 ~khamwon1
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100 Themes 16:Questioning
This poem was inpired by the song Momma Who Bore Me form Spring Awakening (the musical).

I fell in love with the idea of children maturing and parents being to afraid to explain the changes. I think that the lack of teaching this in a proper manner has lead to the naive attitudes teens have toward STD's and Sex.
I know the form isn't standard sonnet form. And i left the ending a little abrupt because we all have our own outcome at this point in life.

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:iconaeilena:
Very nice work. I think that for teens on this site who read this, it might help them. And it's a real insight into most parents fears. Most children have no idea about life from over protective parents and don't have skills in life for anything.
:iconkhamwon1:
Thank you very much. I am a senior in high school and it makes me sick that parents dont teach their kids anything then flip out when they get pregnant or wasted or addicted to drugs.
Thanks again! :hug:

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:iconmagicaljoey:
nice take on the theme, and really well written.
:iconkhamwon1:
thank you! :hug:

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:iconaeilena:
I wish somebody I know would have seen that years ago....
:iconsenoritacritique:
interesting take on the sonnet structure. wonderful story as well. I love the cynical tone in the last stanza
:iconkhamwon1:
why, thank you!

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