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You confess they’re the perfect specimen to love,
luscious locks so beautiful and a smile so bright,
that even darkest caverns of your heart are set free!
The simple bliss to just stand near them is like a dove-
flying into a world were a thousand lustful fires ignite.

But I on the outside see something quite different lurking,
I see a smile that hides the truth and a mind plagued by confusion.
I see the foreshadowing of darker time with no guarantee,
my truths will slowly haunt once you see it is not working.
I am not saying love is false, but that lust is a powerful illusion.
©2007-2009 ~khamwon1
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Author's Comments

100 themes 25: Trouble Lurking

i talked to a friend who was thought they were deeply in love. since my thoughts one were here i figured i would write about it. cuz that relationship is prone to fail. to bad no1 will listen to me to stop the forth coming pain.

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:iconmagicaljoey:
Another good poem, I love reading your stuff.
:iconkhamwon1:
thank you!!! :D

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[link] guaranteed to thrill, chill and fulfill you.
:iconblue-strawberry:
A great idea, and very well written. Unfortunatly, it holds alot of truth.

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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
:iconkhamwon1:
thank you very very much. i wanted to get a clear point across in this one.

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[link] guaranteed to thrill, chill and fulfill you.
:iconblue-strawberry:
you certainly did. No problem:)

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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.

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