Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

 

Evince the Agony by ~khamwon1:iconkhamwon1:



The bitter taste from the berry of betrayal stays,
simply lingering like the midmorning mist.
Once the berry held the illusion that friendship did exist,
it wasn’t always betrayal but a source of pure golden rays,
it even made me think love could survive for days.
However I tragically fear that my judgement missed,
for now I am lost and abandoned in the inexorable haze-
and I am forced to clean the wounds left upon my wrist.

The juice from the berry of betrayal stains a white shirt,
the last ounce of innocence has drained from my soul.
It quickly grows colder than even the most bone chilling breeze-
my emotions and self esteem will forever now be on alert,
for this berry of betrayal has slowly taken its sweet toll,
and now our friendship is forever lost in dark churlish seas.
©2007-2009 ~khamwon1
:iconkhamwon1:

Author's Comments

100 Themes 45: Illusion

I placed this as my illusion entry because i really draw on the illusion that friendship can have. Not saying all friendships are false. I hope you enjoy! :)

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icondevinepoet:
Wow! That was true poetry! :D

--
I had high hopes for you. I guess they were just too high for you to live up to.
:iconmagicaljoey:
I agree, another brilliant piece as always. you hooked me on the very first line and kept me hooked the whole way through.
:star:
:nod:
:iconkhamwon1:
thank you! :hug:

--
[link] guaranteed to thrill, chill and fulfill you.
:iconkhamwon1:
aww, thank you very very much!

--
[link] guaranteed to thrill, chill and fulfill you.
:iconblue-strawberry:
Oh wow. I love it. Strangely the first and last lines were my favourites :o which is odd.
Also its very well written, it flows so well and it left me wondering whether some friendships will be lost forever, despite any efforts. Very thought provoking:)

--
You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
:iconkhamwon1:
i am honnored! thank you for the kind words. i really like the first line as well! :)

--
[link] guaranteed to thrill, chill and fulfill you.
:iconblue-strawberry:
no problem! :highfive: :)

--
You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
:iconelliethebizarre:
wow...u poemed my face rite off.

--
Look after my heart; I've left it with you.
:iconkhamwon1:
lol, that you very much!

--
[link] guaranteed to thrill, chill and fulfill you.

Details

September 5, 2007
970 bytes

Statistics

9
2 [who?]
95 (0 today)
4 (0 today)

Site Map